tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918149619616724504.post14290947105156657..comments2022-11-14T00:38:15.717-08:00Comments on A Cop's Wife Life: Lauren's latest video report in San Quentin prisonJenny Hayeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01719213558147382882noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918149619616724504.post-20390527339032065012011-01-27T09:01:49.241-08:002011-01-27T09:01:49.241-08:00Thanks Marc - good to get the feedback.Thanks Marc - good to get the feedback.Jenny Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01719213558147382882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918149619616724504.post-46663891774995111742011-01-25T21:59:09.911-08:002011-01-25T21:59:09.911-08:00Like the footage, nice graphics!
The dialogue com...Like the footage, nice graphics! <br />The dialogue comes across like a script read, in my humble opinion, lacked spontaneity/ immediacy of conversation, or telling a story as if we were in the room; or maybe this is what you were going for? I'd be game to see her speaking at times, intercut with the great footage. <br />All in, it's a cool thing you have going here- keeping it on my radar!<br />Thanks for sharing this stuff- <br />M.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-918149619616724504.post-87058282915475294612011-01-17T14:56:48.195-08:002011-01-17T14:56:48.195-08:00Hummmmmmmmmmmm.........Hummmmmmmmmmmm.........modelmotionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12005411582406219607noreply@blogger.com