Like the footage, nice graphics! The dialogue comes across like a script read, in my humble opinion, lacked spontaneity/ immediacy of conversation, or telling a story as if we were in the room; or maybe this is what you were going for? I'd be game to see her speaking at times, intercut with the great footage. All in, it's a cool thing you have going here- keeping it on my radar! Thanks for sharing this stuff- M.
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ReplyDeleteLike the footage, nice graphics!
ReplyDeleteThe dialogue comes across like a script read, in my humble opinion, lacked spontaneity/ immediacy of conversation, or telling a story as if we were in the room; or maybe this is what you were going for? I'd be game to see her speaking at times, intercut with the great footage.
All in, it's a cool thing you have going here- keeping it on my radar!
Thanks for sharing this stuff-
M.
Thanks Marc - good to get the feedback.
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